Whispers of heaven in concrete poem format

Whispers from Heaven © Michelle Sherlock

I’ve published this poem before here: https://looking4godtoday.wordpress.com/2014/07/29/whispers-from-heaven/ but am having a play with displaying my poems in concrete poetic form (in the shape of an element in the poem itself).  It would be interesting to hear which you prefer – the simpler one with the photo on my original blog post – or the movement in the image above.

Gentle whispers

Reach out to me

Like waves

Caressing the shore

Saying, “Come,

Be Free”

© Michelle Sherlock 19/2/2015

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